Emotional Appeals and Their Affect on the Brain
The human brain is like
a ball of modelling clay. When first brought into use it is soft and mouldable;
easily imprinted. As time continues, it begins to set and harden, making our
mind unchangeable. Like modelling clay, our minds can become versatile once
again. What is it that has the power to weaken our mind and make it susceptible
once again? Some may argue that fact controls our actions more than our feelings;
however, emotional appeals are more effective than rational explanations at
motivating people to act because of our emotions, mindset, intuition and values.
When persuading someone to make a decision, it can be
very effective to connect with them on an emotional level. One strategy of getting into someone’s head
is to guilt them. Guilt is a very powerful thing; it has the ability to destroy
people. To avoid the gut wrenching wrath of guilt, it is a good idea to take
others feelings into consideration. However, doing so can alter our decision
making a great amount. For example, if you were in a dilemma and one option
would result in hurting someone close to you, your solution would most likely
become much clearer to you. Or, without
even being given the power to choose as you wish, the friend may subtly hint at
how your actions affect others; persuading you to make your choice in their
favour. Although it may not be the right
thing to do, it is very effective.
In addition to emotionally, being able to reach someone psychologically
can impact their motives. In a state of confusion, people tend to be very open
to new ideas or suggestions in hopes to find a solution for their problem. Having
such an open mind can cause one to become vulnerable. If you are close with
someone it can be very easy to get inside their head. Since you know their priorities,
you can make it seem as if one option has only positive outcomes in order to
benefit yourself. Without pressure from others, people can base their actions
off of their own feelings. For example, being asked to test a new skill can be
intimidating for some. The fear could cause them to decline the opportunity.
Despite the fear some may look at it as a chance to conquer great things and
reach a sense of pride or fullness.
Basing
decisions off facts isn’t always a smart idea. Sometimes when in a sticky
situation people don’t always have all of the facts necessary to make a well
informed decision. It is at times like these when quick thinking is called for.
This is where the gut instinct comes into play. People tend to make good
decisions because of the emotion they are feeling. The “gut feeling“ can
be described as an overpowering, nagging, all consuming monster in the pit of
your stomach telling you that something is not right. I have experienced this feeling many times
before, however; one instance that stands out to me was when it happened to my
doctor. A few years ago I was in the hospital with the H1N1 flu. At the time I
was extremely sick and the doctors were very concerned for my well being. I was
having a hard time breathing so my doctors decided to test me for pneumonia,
the test results would take too long to come back, most likely after it would
be too late. One of my doctors realized the danger of my situation and decided
to treat me and get the fluid out of my lungs. Her gut instinct saved my life,
not facts.
Another reason why facts
should not always be used to guide decisions is because there is no happiness
or love accounted for in reason. If people base major life decisions off
science, chances are they will not be happy. For example, in school teenagers
are taught to choose a career path that makes them happy. Despite what they are
told, some will chose to take the best paying job they can find. Years after
sitting at a job they hate, they realize choosing money over happiness was not
the right thing to do. This shows how our values can motivate us. They can lead
us into a great future or a life of wondering what could have been.
Ultimately, peoples
actions are motivated by their emotions, character, intuition, and values; thus
making rational explanations the weaker motivational strategy in comparison to
emotional appeals. This being said, the tactics used to sway people are not
always morally right. Due to our minds gravitation towards emotion, influencing
peoples’ decisions can be a dangerous game to play.
Great essay Victoria! I really enjoyed your use of simile in the introduction paragraph where you talked about modelling clay being similar to the brain. I thought that this technique immediately caught my attention and separated from other essays that didn't have very strong hooks. Great job on that.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that I would look into is that some of your sentences are a little bit short, not fragments, but they just seem like there is something missing. In particular, I noticed this when you said "It is at times like these when quick thinking is called for. This is where the gut instinct comes into play. People tend to make good decisions because of the emotion they are feeling." I feel like if you used more commas and transitional words the sentences would flow a better and just sound less choppy.
Other than that though, I thought it was very well-written. I liked your example of quick thinking where you talked about your own personal experience with pneumonia as I thought that that further drew the reader in and created a connection between yourself and the reader. It added interest to a standard point-evidence paragraph and I thought that it was smartly-used. Great job!